“My dog could do a better job with his tongue!” A wealthy man insults a poor boy shining shoes in an underpass and refuses to pay. But fate brings them face-to-face again the very next day, with a surprising twist neither could have expected.
The underground passage echoed with the shuffle of hurried footsteps. Amidst the hustle, 14-year-old Martin sat quietly by the wall, his shoe-shining kit spread before him. His eyes darted hopefully at each passing shoe, praying for a customer…
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“Just a handful,” he whispered to himself. “Just a handful today, please.”
As the day wore on, Martin’s stomach growled in protest. The meager breakfast of two bread slices felt like a distant memory. He reached for his water bottle, taking a small sip to quell the hunger pangs.
“You can do this, Martin,” he told himself. “For Mom and Josephine.”
The thought of his paralyzed mother and little sister waiting at home bolstered his courage. He plastered on his best smile, ready to tackle whatever the day would bring.
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“Shoe shine, sir? Ma’am?” he called out, his voice barely audible above the din of the underpass.
Hours ticked by, but no one stopped. Martin’s hopes began to dwindle, but he refused to give up. As the afternoon sun beat down, he finally allowed himself a moment of respite. Digging into his worn leather bag, he pulled out a small orange, his lunch for the day.
Just as he began to peel it, a pair of dirty brown leather shoes landed in front of him with a heavy thud.
“Hurry up, kid. Clean it. I’m in a rush,” a gruff voice barked.
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Martin looked up, his heart racing with excitement and trepidation. The man towering above him exuded wealth from head to toe. This could be his chance for a good tip.
“Right away, sir!” Martin said, setting aside his orange and reaching for his supplies.
As he worked on the brown leather shoes, the man’s impatience grew. “What’s taking so long? I don’t have all day!”
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Martin’s hands trembled slightly, but he focused on giving his best service. “Almost done, sir. I promise it’ll look great.”
The man scoffed. “At your age, I was already making more than my father. I wasn’t shining shoes like some beggar.”
Those words stung poor Martin. It had been three years since a drunk driver had taken his father’s life, leaving their family shattered. The memory of that fateful night still haunted Martin—the screeching tires, the sickening crunch of metal, and the devastating news that followed.
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Just months after losing his father, Martin’s world crumbled further when his mother Mariam suffered a stroke, leaving her paralyzed. At just eleven years old, he had shouldered the burden of a provider, sacrificing his childhood to follow in his late father’s footsteps as a shoe shiner.
The memories threatened to overwhelm him, but he pushed them aside. He had a job to finish. He had a family to feed.
“You call this shining?” the man sneered, examining his shoe. “My dog could do a better job with his tongue!”
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Martin’s cheeks burned with shame. “I’m sorry, sir. I can try again—”
“Forget it,” the man cut him off, pulling out his phone. “Yeah, Sylvester here. Reschedule the meeting to 4. I’ll be late, thanks to this incompetent brat.”
As Sylvester ranted into his phone, Martin’s mind drifted to happier times. He remembered his father’s gentle hands guiding him, teaching him the art of shoe shining.
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“It’s not just about the shine, son,” he’d say. “It’s about dignity. Treat every shoe like it’s the most important one you’ll ever touch.”
“Hey! Are you even listening?” Sylvester’s sharp voice yanked Martin back to reality. “What’s your father doing, sending you out here like this? Too lazy to work himself, huh?”
Martin’s throat tightened. “My father… he passed away, sir.”
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Sylvester’s eyes narrowed. “Oh, I see. So your mother’s probably moved on with someone else, popping out more kids to send begging, right? Don’t you people have anything better to do?”
Martin’s fists clenched at his sides, but he forced a polite smile. “That’s $7, sir.”
“SEVEN DOLLARS?” Sylvester exploded. “For this pathetic excuse of a shine? I don’t think so, kid.”
Before Martin could react, Sylvester grabbed his shoes and stormed off, leaving Martin empty-handed and heartbroken.
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“Wait!” he called out, chasing after the man. “Please, sir! I need that money. Please!”
But Sylvester was already in his car, speeding away, leaving poor Martin stranded in a cloud of dust and disappointment.
He slumped against the wall, tears streaming down his face. He looked up at the sky, imagining his father’s face.
“I’m trying, Dad,” he whispered. “I’m really trying.”
His father’s last words echoed in his mind: “Remember, son. Never give up. Each bump is a step closer to your dreams. Remember.”
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Wiping his tears, Martin returned to his spot. There was no time for self-pity. No time for tears.
The next morning, Martin was back at his usual spot, setting up his kit with determination. Suddenly, a commotion nearby caught his attention.
“Help! Someone help!” a woman’s frantic voice pierced the air.
Martin rushed towards the sound, his heart pounding.
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A small crowd had gathered around a fancy car, and to his shock, he recognized the man inside. SYLVESTER. The same entitled man who had insulted him.
“He’s choking on an apple!” someone yelled. “The car doors are locked!”
Without hesitation, Martin grabbed a rock from the roadside and smashed the car window. Glass shattered everywhere as he reached in to unlock the door.
“Stand back!” he shouted, pulling Sylvester out onto the pavement.
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With all his might, Martin delivered several sharp blows to Sylvester’s back. Suddenly, a chunk of apple flew from Sylvester’s mouth, and he gasped for air.
“You… you saved me,” Sylvester wheezed, looking up at Martin with wide, shocked eyes.
Martin helped him to his feet, his own hands shaking. “Are you okay, sir?”
Sylvester nodded, still catching his breath. “I can’t believe it. After how I treated you yesterday… Why did you help me?”
Martin shrugged. “It was the right thing to do.”
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Sylvester’s eyes filled with tears. “I’m so sorry, kid. I was horrible to you. Please, let me make it up to you. Name your price. Anything!”
Martin thought for a moment, then looked up. “Just the $7 from yesterday. That’s all I want.”
Sylvester stared at him in disbelief. “But… I could give you so much more. A new start, maybe?”
Martin shook his head. “I don’t need a new start, sir. I just need to take care of my family.”
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Reluctantly, Sylvester handed over the money. As the crowd dispersed, he lingered, studying Martin’s face. “You’re quite something, kid. What’s your name?”
“Martin, sir.”
Sylvester nodded slowly. “Martin. I won’t forget this… or you.”
As Sylvester walked away to his car, Martin clutched the hard-earned money in his fist. He looked up at the sky again, a small smile beaming on his face.
“I remember, Dad,” he whispered. “I always do.”
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The next morning, Martin was jolted awake by his sister’s excited screams.
“Marty! Marty! Come quick!”
He rushed outside, his mother calling after them in confusion. There, on their doorstep, sat a white bag bulging with cash and a note.
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With trembling hands, Martin read aloud:
“Thanks is a small word for what you did. I know you’d refuse this. But you deserve a happy childhood. Took me just an hour to find your address. The world’s a small place, isn’t it?! Hope we meet again someday, and I hope you’re just the pure heart of gold you are!
— Sylvester.”
Tears of joy and shock filled Martin’s eyes. His sister jumped up and down, and their mother called out from inside, clearly shocked at seeing so much money.
“Martin? What’s going on?” she approached in her wheelchair.
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Martin’s mind raced. This money could change everything: his mother’s treatment, Josephine’s education, and their entire future. But was it right to accept it?
He walked to the small altar in their cottage, grabbing two pieces of paper. On one, he wrote “REMEMBER,” and on the other, “FORGET.” He folded them, shuffling them with his hands.
Lighting a candle before the crucifix, Martin closed his eyes. “Dad,” he whispered, “help me make the right choice.”
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With a deep breath, he picked up a piece of folded paper and slowly opened it. A small smile lit up his face when he saw the word “REMEMBER.”
In that moment, Martin knew. He would accept the money, not for himself, but for his family. He would remember his father’s lessons, his own struggles, and the kindness that can exist even in the hardest of hearts.
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“Josephine!” he called out, his voice brewing with emotion. “Go tell Mom we’re going to the doctor today. And then… maybe we’ll stop for ice cream on the way home. Get Mom a new comfy mattress. And lots of groceries for the entire week!”
As Josephine’s delighted squeals filled the air, Martin clutched the note to his chest. He had remembered, and in doing so, he had found a way forward.
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This work is inspired by real events and people, but it has been fictionalized for creative purposes. Names, characters, and details have been changed to protect privacy and enhance the narrative. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental and not intended by the author.
The author and publisher make no claims to the accuracy of events or the portrayal of characters and are not liable for any misinterpretation. This story is provided “as is,” and any opinions expressed are those of the characters and do not reflect the views of the author or publisher.
I Found a Phone Number and a Cryptic Note in My Husband’s Old Coat — What I Discovered Left Me Stunned
When I found a mysterious note in my husband’s old coat, its cryptic message sent my mind reeling. What followed was a journey of doubt, suspense, and a shocking revelation.
The house was alive with the sound of laughter. My son, Dylan, sat on the floor, lining up toy cars in a neat row, his little tongue sticking out in concentration. Next to him, his sister, Ella, twirled in her princess dress, spinning so fast that the hem of her skirt fluttered like a butterfly’s wings.
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“Watch out, Dylan!” she giggled. “I’m a ballerina tornado!”
Dylan rolled his eyes but smiled. “Tornadoes don’t wear crowns, silly!”
From the kitchen, I smiled as I poured coffee into a mug. Their voices echoed, blending with the morning sunlight streaming through the windows.
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Denton strode into the living room, adjusting the cuffs of his shirt. His briefcase dangled in one hand, his usual confident stride making him look taller than usual. He bent down to kiss Ella on the head. “Don’t spin too much, sweetheart. We don’t want anyone getting dizzy.”
He turned to Dylan, tousling his hair. “Hold the fort while I’m gone, buddy.”
Dylan puffed out his chest. “I will, Dad!”
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Denton glanced at me as he shrugged into his coat. “I tossed an old one in the donation pile last night. Be sure to check the pockets. I don’t want to accidentally lose anything important.”
“Got it,” I said, watching as he gave me a quick smile and headed for the door.
“Love you!” he called.
“Love you too,” I replied. The door clicked shut behind him.
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Later, with the kids still playing, I turned to the donation pile. Denton’s old coat lay on top. As I picked it up, my fingers brushed against something in the inner pocket.
Frowning, I slipped my hand inside and pulled out a small, folded piece of paper.
It felt important, like something I shouldn’t ignore. I opened it slowly.
The words sent a chill down my spine.
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“This is between us. No one else can know.”
My breath caught. I flipped the paper over.
“For service, call” and a phone number I didn’t recognize.
My heart thumped hard in my chest. My first instinct was denial. Denton wouldn’t hide something from me. Would he?
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I folded the note back and shoved it into my pocket. The house suddenly felt too quiet.
That evening, I kept my hands busy while my thoughts ran wild. I cooked dinner, asked the kids about their day, and tried not to let my mind wander back to the note.
Denton walked in just before dinner, setting his briefcase on the counter. He gave me a quick kiss on the cheek. “Smells great in here,” he said, glancing at the bubbling pot on the stove.
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I smiled tightly. “Thanks. It’ll be ready in a minute.”
At dinner, he laughed with the kids, teasing Ella about her spinning and asking Dylan how his car races went. He looked like the same Denton I’d known for years—kind, attentive, and completely at ease.
And yet, the note burned in my pocket.
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That night, as we lay in bed, Denton turned off his side lamp and leaned over to kiss my forehead. “Goodnight, hon,” he murmured, his voice warm and familiar.
“Goodnight,” I whispered back, staring at the ceiling long after he’d fallen asleep.
The next morning, after Denton left for work, I sat at the kitchen table with my phone in hand. The note lay next to it, the words staring up at me like a dare.
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Taking a deep breath, I dialed the number.
“Hello?” The voice was calm, feminine, and confident.
“Hi,” I said, my voice trembling slightly. “I would like to book your… services.”
There was a pause on the other end. Then, the woman said, “If you have my number, you must know what to do. Be here at 2 p.m. tomorrow.” And she gave me the address right before hanging up.
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Before I could ask anything else, the line went dead.
I stared at my phone, my stomach churning. What did she mean? What was I supposed to do?
The next afternoon, I stepped out of the taxi, clutching my bag tightly. The seaside mansion loomed before me, its large windows gleaming in the sunlight. Waves crashed softly in the distance, a soothing backdrop to my rising nerves.
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The front door opened before I could knock. A young woman, polished and poised, stood there. Her sleek black dress hugged her figure, and she wore a faint smile that didn’t quite reach her eyes.
“You must be here for the appointment,” she said, her tone smooth but unreadable. “Come in.”
I hesitated but followed her inside.
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The room she led me to was stunning, with elegant furniture, fresh flowers in crystal vases, and the faint scent of lavender in the air. I perched on the edge of an armchair, trying to look calm while my pulse raced.
The woman gestured to the seat opposite me. “Please, make yourself comfortable. Someone will be with you shortly.”
I nodded, my throat dry, as she stepped out of the room, leaving me alone.
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The door creaked open, and the young woman returned. She moved with an effortless grace, her face a mask of polite professionalism.
I cleared my throat, determined to get answers. “What services do you provide?”
She raised an eyebrow, her expression a mix of curiosity and mild amusement. “If you’re here, you should already know.”
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Her tone was calm, almost rehearsed, but it grated on my nerves. “I don’t know,” I said, my voice sharper now. “That’s why I’m asking.”
She tilted her head, as if considering me. “If you say so,” she murmured, her words cryptic.
My frustration bubbled over. I fumbled with my phone, pulled up a picture of Denton, and held it out to her. “This man. Has he been here?”
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For a moment, her composure faltered. Her eyes flicked to the screen, and something unreadable crossed her face. Then, she smiled faintly. “You’ll find out soon enough,” she said.
“What does that mean?” I demanded, but she stepped back toward the door, ignoring my question. “Wait here,” she instructed before slipping out again.
The silence that followed was unbearable. My mind raced, imagining every worst-case scenario. Had Denton lied to me? Was this woman protecting some secret?
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Suddenly, a burst of noise shattered the quiet. The door swung open, and a wave of people flooded in, their cheers echoing through the room.
Confetti rained down, and my heart jolted in confusion. I recognized faces—friends, family, even my kids and nephews. Dylan and Ella ran toward me, laughing and throwing handfuls of colorful paper in the air.
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“Mama, surprise!” Ella squealed, jumping into my lap.
I looked around, bewildered, as Denton appeared in the doorway. He wore a sharp tuxedo and carried a bouquet of deep red roses. His grin was wide, his eyes sparkling with mischief.
“Denton?” I stammered, my voice barely audible over the commotion.
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He walked over and knelt in front of me, holding out the roses. “Happy 10th anniversary, darling,” he said softly.
Behind him, a large banner unfurled. In bold letters, it read: “Happy 10th Anniversary!”
My breath caught as the realization hit me. This wasn’t betrayal. It was… a surprise.
Denton took my hand, helping me to my feet. “I bet you have a million questions,” he said, his tone playful.
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“That’s an understatement,” I replied, my voice shaky but tinged with relief.
He chuckled, glancing at the young woman who now stood smiling near the door. “I knew you’d find that note and wouldn’t be able to resist following the clues.”
I blinked at him, still processing. “The note? The phone call? All of this?”
“It was all part of the plan,” he said, squeezing my hand. “This house—it’s like the place where we first met. Remember? That summer by the sea?”
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My eyes widened as memories rushed back. The sandy beaches, the salty breeze, the way he’d made me laugh until my sides hurt. “I… I can’t believe you remembered,” I whispered.
“How could I forget?” he said, his voice soft. “I wanted to do something special. Something you’d never forget.”
The kids tugged at my arm, their excitement bubbling over.
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“Mama, we were in on it too!” Dylan said proudly. “Dad said it was a secret game, and we had to wait here until you showed up!”
Ella nodded enthusiastically. “We got to throw confetti!”
I laughed, the tension in my chest finally breaking. “You two did a great job.”
Denton gestured toward the young woman. “And this is Rebecca. She works for a company that organizes parties like this one.”
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Rebecca stepped forward, smiling. “Your husband has quite the imagination. I was happy to help.”
As the evening unfolded, Denton explained how he’d rented the mansion for the day and coordinated everything with our friends and family.
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“I wanted to remind you of where it all began,” he said as we sat together, the kids playing nearby. “Life gets busy, and sometimes we forget to take a step back and appreciate what we’ve built.”
I felt a lump in my throat as I looked at him. “I can’t believe I doubted you,” I admitted. “I let my mind go to the worst places.”
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He chuckled, wrapping an arm around me. “I wanted to keep it mysterious, but maybe I overdid it a little.”
“Just a little,” I teased, smiling through tears.
This work is inspired by real events and people, but it has been fictionalized for creative purposes. Names, characters, and details have been changed to protect privacy and enhance the narrative. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental and not intended by the author.
The author and publisher make no claims to the accuracy of events or the portrayal of characters and are not liable for any misinterpretation. This story is provided “as is,” and any opinions expressed are those of the characters and do not reflect the views of the author or publisher.
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