My Boyfriend Proposed Right After Seeing My Luxury Apartment—He Had No Idea It Was a Test

When Sloane finally lets her boyfriend see her luxurious penthouse, he proposes the next day. But when a sudden “disaster” strikes, his loyalty crumbles. What he doesn’t know? It’s all a test… and she’s been watching closely. This is a story about power, love, and the moment a woman chooses herself.

I don’t usually play games, especially with people.

But something about Ryan’s timing felt too polished, too sudden… like he’d skipped a few pages in our story and jumped to the part where I say “yes” with stars in my eyes.

A pensive woman sitting on a couch | Source: Midjourney

A pensive woman sitting on a couch | Source: Midjourney

Spoiler: I did say yes. Just not for the reason he thought.

We met eight months ago at a dive bar downtown, one of those dimly lit places where the cocktails are all whiskey-based and the bartenders wear suspenders like it’s a religion.

Ryan had an easy smile, a firm handshake, and eyes that lingered just long enough to be charming, not creepy. We talked about everything that night, late 20s burnout, startup dreams, childhood regrets.

The interior of a dive bar | Source: Midjourney

The interior of a dive bar | Source: Midjourney

He was smart. Charismatic. Ambitious in a restless, surface-level kind of way. And when he kissed me outside under a busted neon sign that blinked like it couldn’t decide what mood it was in, I thought that maybe this could be something.

And it was. For a while.

But here’s the thing about charm, it can start to sound like a script.

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A smiling man | Source: Midjourney

By our third month together, I noticed the patterns. We always went to his apartment. A cramped one-bedroom in a building that smelled faintly of incense and despair.

He called it “charming.” I called it “no hot water after 10.”

Ryan always paid for dinner but only if we ate somewhere cheap. He talked about “tired gold-diggers” and “materialistic women” like it was a rehearsed speech he knew well. I started realizing that he spent a lot of time talking about what he didn’t want in a partner and very little time asking me what I wanted.

What Ryan didn’t know?

The interior of a fast food place | Source: Midjourney

The interior of a fast food place | Source: Midjourney

Two years ago, I sold my AI-powered wellness startup to a tech giant for seven figures. I’d spent my early 20s living on instant ramen and building backend code between shifts at a co-writing space that smelled like ambition and burnt coffee.

The acquisition was clean, and I reinvested most of it. Between that, advisory roles, and a few early crypto plays I cashed out of just in time, I was more than fine. Now, I worked at another tech company, helping build them up and keep myself busy.

But I never dressed the part. I drove my old car because it had been my father’s and he had passed it down to me. I wore clothes that weren’t name brands but fit well on my body. And I hadn’t brought Ryan home because I needed to know who he was before he saw what I had.

A bowl of ramen | Source: Midjourney

A bowl of ramen | Source: Midjourney

By the sixth month, I invited him to my place.

“Finally, Sloane,” Ryan grinned as he stepped out of the car. “I was starting to think that you were hiding a secret family or something.”

The doorman, Joe, greeted me by name, smiling warmly.

“Sloane, welcome home,” he said, tipping his hat.

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A smiling doorman | Source: Midjourney

Ryan glanced at him, then back to me, eyebrows raised. I didn’t say anything. I just tapped the button for the private elevator and stepped inside. The doors slid shut with a whisper.

When they opened again, we were in my apartment. My sanctuary. Light poured in from the floor-to-ceiling windows. The skyline glittered like it had dressed up for the occasion. My living room was clean and quiet, the kind of quiet that came with double-insulated glass and peace that money can buy.

He didn’t step in at first. He just stood there, staring.

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An elevator in a foyer | Source: Midjourney

“This is… wow, Sloane,” he said finally. “You live here?!”

“Yeah,” I said, slipping off my heels and placing them on a mat I’d imported from Tokyo. “Not bad, right? Comfortable.”

He walked in slowly, like he was afraid to touch anything but couldn’t help himself. His fingertips dragged across the marble countertops. He opened the wine fridge, Sub-Zero, custom installed, and nodded to himself.

“Not too shabby,” he said.

A wine fridge in a kitchen | Source: Midjourney

A wine fridge in a kitchen | Source: Midjourney

Ryan continued to walk around, stopping at one of the abstract canvases hanging over the fireplace.

“How much is that one worth?” he asked.

I shrugged but I was watching him now. Closely.

He didn’t ask to sit down. He just kept moving. His eyes lingered on the custom couch, on the Eames chair in the corner, the fridge that synced with my sommelier app to suggest pairings based on what I had chilled.

A chair in the living room of a penthouse | Source: Midjourney

A chair in the living room of a penthouse | Source: Midjourney

He didn’t kiss me that night. He barely touched my arm or leg, something that he had done all the time. Instead, he just kept smiling that dazed, boyish smile… like he’d stumbled into a fairytale and didn’t want to wake up.

And one week later, he proposed.

Ryan and I hadn’t really talked about marriage. Not in the way you do when you’re building a future. No deep conversations about kids or biological clocks or timelines, no dreamy what-if scenarios over wine.

A close up of a man | Source: Midjourney

A close up of a man | Source: Midjourney

Just vague nods to “someday” and offhand comments about “building something together.”

It always felt like a placeholder, not a plan.

So when he showed up a week later, standing in my living room with a ring box in one hand and nervous energy leaking from every pore, I blinked.

Unaware. But also… not surprised.

A ring box on a coffee table | Source: Midjourney

A ring box on a coffee table | Source: Midjourney

Ryan launched into a speech. He went on about knowing when you’ve found the one. About how life’s too short to wait or waste time. Something about seizing the moment when the universe gives you a sign.

I smiled. I pretended to be surprised. I said yes. I even kissed him.

But something inside me stayed still.

A smiling woman standing in a living room | Source: Midjourney

A smiling woman standing in a living room | Source: Midjourney

Because what he didn’t know was that Jules, my best friend, had seen him the day after his jaw dropped when he saw my penthouse.

She’d called me from the mall.

“He’s at the jewelry counter,” she said, whispering. “Sloane, he’s literally pointing at rings like he’s late for something. He’s not even looking at them properly! Girl, are you sure about him? He’s going to propose soon. I can feel it from his energy.”

A ring display at a jewelry store | Source: Midjourney

A ring display at a jewelry store | Source: Midjourney

I didn’t know how to answer her. I cared for Ryan, sure. But did I love him?

Knowing what I knew, the proposal wasn’t romantic at all.

It was strategic. So yeah, I said yes. But not because I was in love. Because I needed to know if he was.

Did Ryan want a life with me? Or did he want a lifestyle that came with a marble kitchen and a fridge smarter than most people?

I needed to be sure.

A romantic table setting | Source: Midjourney

A romantic table setting | Source: Midjourney

So I smiled, slid the ring on, and started planning the trap.

One week later, I called him in tears.

“Ryan?” I sniffled, letting just enough panic bleed into my voice. “I got fired. They said it was restructuring but I don’t know… Everything’s just… falling apart.”

A woman sitting on a couch | Source: Midjourney

A woman sitting on a couch | Source: Midjourney

There was a pause. Just a beat too long.

“Oh… wow. That’s… unexpected,” he said slowly, like his brain was trying to pull the words out of sludge.

“I know,” I whispered. “And to make it worse… the apartment? My goodness! A pipe burst. There’s water damage everywhere. The wooden floors are ruined in the guest room. It’s unlivable.”

A close up of a burst pipe | Source: Midjourney

A close up of a burst pipe | Source: Midjourney

More silence. Thick, heavy silence. And then a throat clearing.

“Unlivable?” he repeated. “What does that mean?”

“Exactly what you think it means, Ryan. I’m staying with Jules for now. Just until I figure things out.”

This time, the silence stretched.

A man talking on the phone | Source: Midjourney

A man talking on the phone | Source: Midjourney

I sat cross-legged on my leather sofa, bone dry, of course, twisting my hair into a loose, anxious knot for effect. I imagined him on the other end, blinking stupidly, recalculating.

The ring.

The “forever” speech.

The skyline he’d mentally moved into.

“I… I didn’t expect this, Sloane,” he finally said, his voice having lost all its lustre. “Maybe we should… slow things down. Rebuild. You know, get stable before we move forward.”

A woman sitting on a couch wearing a fluffy sweater | Source: Midjourney

A woman sitting on a couch wearing a fluffy sweater | Source: Midjourney

“Right,” I murmured, just above a whisper, letting my breath hitch like I was trying not to cry. This was it… this was Ryan refusing to see me. This was Ryan blatantly showing me that he didn’t care.

“I get it,” I said.

The next morning, he texted me.

“I think we moved too fast. Let’s take some space, Sloane.”

No calls. No offers to help. He was just… gone.

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A cellphone on a table | Source: Midjourney

I waited three days.

And then I called him. It was a video call this time because some truths deserve a front-row seat.

Ryan answered the phone, looking like he hadn’t shaved or slept well. His hoodie was wrinkled and his voice came out rough.

“Sloane, hey…”

A close up of a tired man in a grey hoodie | Source: Midjourney

A close up of a tired man in a grey hoodie | Source: Midjourney

I was standing on the balcony, wearing my silk pajamas, barefoot against the warm stone tiles. I had a chilled glass of champagne on the side table next to me, and I was ready to put my heartache on hold.

And to teach Ryan a lesson, of course.

I didn’t smile. I just tilted the phone slightly.

A glass of champagne on a table | Source: Midjourney

A glass of champagne on a table | Source: Midjourney

“You’re back home?” he asked, hope sparking his eyes.

“I’m home,” I said simply. “But it’s funny, isn’t it?”

“What is, Sloane?” he asked, sighing like he was just so tired.

“That you vanished faster than the so-called flood in my apartment. Well, everything is fine. There was nothing wrong with my apartment. I just wanted to know if you truly cared about me… but I guess not, huh?”

A woman standing on a penthouse balcony | Source: Midjourney

A woman standing on a penthouse balcony | Source: Midjourney

His mouth opened, then closed.

“I got promoted too, by the way,” I added. My voice was steady, but my heart was hammering.

This was it.

This was the moment I ended it with Ryan. All those months of us getting to know each other, spending time together… all of that was over.

“Anyway,” I continued. “The CEO offered me the European expansion. I’ll have Paris on my doorstep. Big win for me, Ryan.”

A view of the Eiffel tower | Source: Midjourney

A view of the Eiffel tower | Source: Midjourney

A flicker of shame crossed his face. Or maybe it was guilt. They often wear the same skin, don’t they?

“But thank you,” I continued, lifting the glass to my lips. “For showing me what ‘forever’ means to you. We clearly have different definitions of the word.”

“Sloane, wait… I…”

“No,” I said, my voice cracking on that word. I didn’t cover it. I let him hear the pain in my voice. “You don’t get to speak to me. Not now, not ever.”

A tired man with his eyes closed | Source: Midjourney

A tired man with his eyes closed | Source: Midjourney

He blinked.

“You had your chance, Ryan. You had me. Before the skyline, before the stories, before the rushed proposal… And you let go the second it didn’t look easy for you.”

I held his gaze, just long enough to make it sting.

Then I ended the call.

Blocked. Deleted. Gone.

A side profile of a woman standing on a balcony | Source: Midjourney

A side profile of a woman standing on a balcony | Source: Midjourney

Jules came over that night with Thai food and zero judgment.

She didn’t ask questions. She just kicked off her shoes, handed me a container of spring rolls, and flopped onto the couch like she’d lived there in another life.

“He really thought he played you,” she said, unwrapping her chopsticks. “Meanwhile, you were three steps ahead, glass in hand.”

Thai food takeout on a coffee table | Source: Midjourney

Thai food takeout on a coffee table | Source: Midjourney

I gave her a half-smile, eyes still pulled toward the skyline. It looked the same as it always had, endless and glowing, but somehow… brighter. Maybe it was just me, finally seeing clearly.

“It’s weird,” I murmured. “I’m not even heartbroken, maybe a little bit. But I am… disappointed. Like I wanted him to pass the test, Jules. I really did. I was rooting for Ryan.”

“Girl,” she said, mouth full of noodles. “He didn’t even bring an umbrella to the storm. You made one phone call and he bailed like you were on fire. That man was in it for the perks, not the person.”

A carton of noodles | Source: Midjourney

A carton of noodles | Source: Midjourney

I laughed, really laughed, but there was a lump in my throat anyway. Not for Ryan.

Rather for what I thought we could’ve been. For who I thought he might be.

“I think the worst part,” I said slowly. “Is knowing that he wouldn’t have survived the real storms. Like… if things actually got hard.”

Jules put her carton down and looked me dead in the eye.

“He’s not your storm shelter, babe,” she said. “He was just the weak roof you hadn’t tested yet.”

A pensive woman sitting on a couch | Source: Midjourney

A pensive woman sitting on a couch | Source: Midjourney

And somehow, that landed harder than anything else.

People love to say, “You’ll know it’s real when things get hard.”

So, I made things look hard.

And what did he do?

A glum woman sitting on a couch | Source: Midjourney

A glum woman sitting on a couch | Source: Midjourney

Ghosted me. Ran.

Because it was clear that Ryan wasn’t in love with me. He was in love with the idea of me, the lifestyle, the convenience, the curated illusion. But the second that cracked, even just a little, he folded.

Not everyone can handle the truth behind the shine.

But me? I’d rather be alone in a penthouse with my peace than hand over the keys to someone who only wanted the view.

A close up of a man | Source: Midjourney

A close up of a man | Source: Midjourney

Real love isn’t about who stays when the lights are on. It’s about who holds you through the flicker. Ryan left before the first rumble of thunder.

And now?

I still have the view. The job that promises to take me places and the fridge that talks.

And most importantly?

I have the lesson.

So here’s to champagne, closure, and never again confusing potential with promise.

A glass of champagne | Source: Midjourney

A glass of champagne | Source: Midjourney

What would you have done?

My Late Partner’s Parents Suddenly Appeared & Demanded I Give Them the Keys to His House — I Agreed under One Condition

When Jason’s estranged parents show up demanding the house he left behind, Alice is thrust into a battle she never expected. Grieving and determined, she agrees to consider their claim, but only if they can answer the one question that haunted Jason until his final days.

There are moments in life that change everything, and for Jason and me, that moment happened when we were 17. I’ll never forget the day he showed up at my door, eyes red from crying, with nothing but a backpack and a broken heart.

A teen boy standing outside a house | Source: Midjourney

A teen boy standing outside a house | Source: Midjourney

His parents had thrown him out like he was nothing, without even giving him a proper reason. My mom didn’t even hesitate; she took one look at him and knew. From that day on, he was part of our family.

We leaned on each other through all the awkward years of high school and the stress of college. I went into HR because, well, people are complicated, and I liked figuring them out. Jason? He was a genius with computers, always able to make sense of the things I couldn’t.

We were a team, balancing each other out perfectly. Then, four years ago, life hit us with the worst blow imaginable.

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Two people sharing a look | Source: Midjourney

Jason was diagnosed with bone cancer. It was like the universe decided we’d had too many good years, and it was time to even the score.

But even then, we stayed strong. I picked up more hours, handled the mortgage on the house Jason had bought, and kept us going.

And Jason, in his quiet, stubborn way, held onto this hope that maybe his parents would come around. But they didn’t.

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A sick man lying in bed | Source: Midjourney

Jason’s funeral was barely a month ago, and I was still drowning in the grief of it all when his family came knocking. The very people who had abandoned him when he needed them most were now standing on my doorstep like they had every right to be there.

I remember opening the door, my heart in my throat, not knowing what to expect. But I certainly wasn’t expecting this.

Susan, Jason’s mom, looked at me with this fake sweetness that made my skin crawl.

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A mature woman smiling sympathetically | Source: Midjourney

“Alice, dear,” she began, her voice dripping with insincerity, “we were so sorry to hear about Jason. It must be so difficult for you, living here all alone.”

I nodded, not trusting myself to speak. What could I possibly say to her? She wasn’t here for Jason. She never had been.

Charles, his dad, didn’t waste any time. “We need to talk about the house,” he said, his tone cold and businesslike. “Jason was our son, and this house should be ours now.”

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A serious man | Source: Pexels

The words hit me like a punch to the gut. I couldn’t believe what I was hearing. “What do you mean, ‘yours’? Jason bought this house, and I’ve been paying the mortgage. It’s in my name.”

That’s when their lawyer, who had been standing off to the side like some silent executioner, decided to chime in.

“Legally speaking,” he began, his voice smooth and practiced, “as Jason’s next of kin, his parents have a rightful claim to the property. Without a will, the law generally favors the immediate family.”

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A thoughtful and serious man | Source: Pexels

“You think you can just come in here, after all this time, and take his house? You didn’t care about him when he was alive, and now you want what was his?”

Susan’s face hardened, the facade cracking just a little. “Alice, we’re his family. Blood is thicker than water. Jason would have wanted us to have this house, to keep it in the family.”

I could feel the anger bubbling inside me, but I forced myself to stay calm.

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An angry woman | Source: Midjourney

“Jason put this house in my name over a year ago, after he got sick. We knew this might happen, and we made sure everything was legal. You don’t have a claim here. If you want this house, you can buy it from me for the price I paid Jason plus the four years of mortgage payments I made on it.”

Charles stepped forward, his voice low and threatening. “You know we can’t afford that, you selfish little… you know well that Jason would’ve wanted us to have this house. You transfer the mortgage to our name, and we’ll take over the payments. That’s my best offer. We’ll fight you in court if we have to.”

I met his gaze, refusing to back down. “You do what you have to, Charles. But before you go charging into court, there’s something you should know.”

An angry woman | Source: Midjourney

An angry woman | Source: Midjourney

They all froze, a flicker of uncertainty passing over their faces. Good. Let them feel a fraction of the fear they’d caused Jason to feel all those years ago.

I turned and walked over to the sideboard in the living room, opening a drawer that had become far too familiar over the past month. Inside was a single envelope, worn and creased from being handled so many times.

I held it up, the weight almost crushing in its simplicity.

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A letter | Source: Pexels

“This,” I said, walking back toward them, “is what Jason left to you. It’s his final letter.”

Susan’s eyes lit up with something I couldn’t quite place — hope, greed, desperation, maybe all three. “A letter?” she asked, her voice trembling. “What does it say?”

I handed the envelope to her, watching as her fingers trembled slightly as she took it. “Why don’t you read it and find out?”

She hesitated, then slowly opened the envelope, pulling out the single sheet of paper inside.

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A woman opening a letter | Source: Midjourney

As she began to read, Charles and Jason’s brother, Mark, leaned in, their expressions a mix of anticipation and something darker.

But that hope in their eyes soon dimmed, replaced by cold, hard anger. Jason’s letter wasn’t what they had expected.

“I’m sorry,” Jason had written, “that I wasn’t the son you wanted me to be. But I’ve learned to forgive you for the pain you caused, and I hope one day you can forgive yourselves, too. I wish things could have been different, but I’ve made peace with what is.”

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A handwritten letter | Source: Pexels

The room was silent as they finished reading, the weight of Jason’s words hanging heavy in the air. For a moment, nobody spoke. They just stood there, staring at the letter like it was some cruel joke.

Finally, Susan looked up, her face twisted with something that might have been grief but was more likely disappointment.

“This… this isn’t what we expected,” she said, her voice flat.

I couldn’t help the bitter smile that tugged at my lips.

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A woman with a grim smile | Source: Midjourney

“No, I suppose it isn’t. You came here thinking you could claim what wasn’t yours, that you could somehow make up for the years you lost with him by taking something from me. But all Jason left you was his forgiveness. And honestly, that’s more than you deserve.”

Charles clenched his fists, his anger palpable. “You think you’re so righteous, don’t you? Sitting here in his house, pretending like you were the only one who ever cared about him.”

I took a deep breath, steadying myself.

A determined woman | Source: Midjourney

A determined woman | Source: Midjourney

This was the moment I had been dreading and preparing for in equal measure.

“No, Charles, I don’t think I’m righteous. But I do know that I was there for Jason when you weren’t. I was the one who held his hand when he was scared, who made sure he had a home when you turned him out. And if you want to take this house from me, you’re going to have to give me something you’ve never given Jason: an honest answer.”

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A woman pointing | Source: Midjourney

They all stared at me, their anger momentarily silenced by the gravity of my words.

“Why did you cut ties with your own son? Why did you ignore his attempts to reconcile? If you can answer those questions honestly, without lies or excuses, I’ll consider your request. But if you can’t, then you have no right to anything he left behind.”

The silence that followed was thick and suffocating. Their lawyer shifted uncomfortably, glancing at them like he wished he were anywhere but here.

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A man adjusting his tie | Source: Unsplash

Susan’s eyes darted around the room, looking anywhere but at me, while Charles seemed to be searching for the right words, his mouth opening and closing as if the truth was stuck somewhere deep inside him.

Finally, it was Susan who broke the silence, her voice a whisper. “We were… He didn’t want to do what we wanted, and we… we thought it was better that he’d live without us.”

Her words hung in the air, hollow and empty, devoid of any real remorse.

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A woman speaking | Source: Midjourney

They knew it, too. I could see it in their faces, the dawning realization that there was no justification for what they had done, no excuse that could erase the pain they had caused their son.

I shook my head, a sad smile tugging at my lips. “That’s not good enough. It’ll never be good enough.”

The lawyer, sensing the futility of their situation, stepped forward, clearing his throat. “I think it’s best if we leave, Mr. and Mrs. Miller. There’s nothing more to be done here.”

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A man in a suit | Source: Pexels

They looked at him, then back at me, and for the first time, I saw something in their eyes that wasn’t anger or entitlement. It was defeat. Pure and simple.

Without another word, they turned and walked out of the house, their footsteps echoing in the quiet hallway. I followed them to the door, watching as they got into their car and drove away, the weight of what had just happened settling over me like a blanket.

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A car driving down a street | Source: Pexels

As I closed the door behind them, I felt a mix of sorrow and relief, a strange combination that left me feeling empty and full simultaneously.

Jason was gone, but in the end, I had protected his memory and legacy from those who didn’t deserve it. And that, at least, was something.

With a final sigh, I locked the door, the sound of the deadbolt sliding into place a quiet affirmation of everything I’d fought for. The house was mine, no; it was ours. And I would carry Jason’s memory with me in these walls and my heart for as long as I lived.

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An emotional woman leaning against a door | Source: Midjourney

Here’s another story: At a family dinner, Jason’s new mattress ignites a fierce conflict. His mother demands he return it to fund his half-sister’s car. Tensions soar as Jason stands his ground, feeling neglected for years. When his grandparents intervene, shocking revelations unfold, forever altering family dynamics. 

This work is inspired by real events and people, but it has been fictionalized for creative purposes. Names, characters, and details have been changed to protect privacy and enhance the narrative. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental and not intended by the author.

The author and publisher make no claims to the accuracy of events or the portrayal of characters and are not liable for any misinterpretation. This story is provided “as is,” and any opinions expressed are those of the characters and do not reflect the views of the author or publisher.

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